Fiction: ► Big Brother

Slenderman - Doctor · 10-23-2010, 06:48 AM

Part One

He cowered in the corner, his legs squashed inwards towards his stomach as his arms gripped around them, forming a crouched ball sort-of shape; his back firmly up against the corner of the fence. He looked back towards the kitchen door where Katie was smirking back. Closing his eyes for a brief moment, he suddenly felt a cold heavy drop of water hit his neck and roll down his spine, with several more droplets soon following.

Katie, his sister, locked the door and headed back indoors.

"That'll teach him," she giggled, flicking the heating on as she skipped past the dial and walked through to the living room. Without any tiny feeling of guilt or worry, she smiled to herself and dived, head-first, into the warmth of the fluffy cream rug which lay in the centre of the room. Still half-laughing to herself, she made a reach for the remote and clicked the TV on.

Meanwhile, a naked Tom was still cowering outside in the far corner of the garden; the safest option he had. See, not ten minutes prior to this, Katie had walked in on Tom masturbating into her knickers whilst watching some lesbians cover themselves with chocolate and, well, I'm sure you can visualise a porn scene for yourself. Unfortunately for Tom, he had forgotten to lock his bedroom door and, with his window being open even the smallest amount, a gust of wind broke into his room and blew Tom's door half-open at the precise moment that Katie had left the bathroom.

Luckily for him, though, the garden was covered by several bushes and hedges surrounding the fenced borders. However, on the flip-side, unfortunately for him, he was locked out with no clothes and no way back into the house. Well, no. I tell a lie. I say there was no way back in; Katie had given him one option. In order to teach him a lesson and shame him forever, she'd unlocked the front door and told him that the only way into the warmth and privacy of the house was through the main porch by the front street.

Obviously, though, Tom wasn't exactly going to let that be Plan A. There had to be a better and easier route back inside, though the challenge proved a very difficult one.

As the rain started rattling off the shed windows, Tom knew his time and options were limited. If he didn't make a move soon, he'd be stuck outside for the foreseeable because, if he'd learnt anything about his sister lately, it was that she wasn't one to give in easily. And, worse than that, he'd be stuck outside in the nude, catching a lovely cold to go with the humiliation. Oh, and just to add another suitcase full of bad to the situation, his parents were away for the week, meaning Katie could have complete control for quite a long time.

Now gently quivering in the corner of the garden, Tom had seriously learnt his lesson. That was fine. But he had to prove to Katie that he'd learnt his lesson. And that wasn't going to be easy.

Cuffed · 10-23-2010, 06:54 AM

new story I see.
Keep it up dude it's good.

Slenderman - Doctor · 10-23-2010, 07:36 AM

Part Two

As an ignorant Katie continued watching Jeremy Kyle on ITV3, Tom started brainstorming for an idea. But, alas, he had nothing. To taunt him some, there was a pair of overalls hanging right by the shed window; however, he had no key and therefore no way in. Every idea he had was doomed to fail and he was starting to give up hope. Maybe he should just do what Katie said, and run round the front. But as much as he geared himself up to do it, a horrible question raced through his mind.

What if she hadn't kept her word; what if the front door was locked?

He wouldn't put it past her.

However, at the exact moment he decided he'd make a run for it, he had a revelation. It wasn't the nicest idea, but it was the best he had. Keeping low and his hiding from view of over-looking neighbours, he crawled through the overshadowed areas of the garden, through the bushes and down towards the main decking by the back door. A final glance around to check neighbouring windows and then, with no hesitation, he made a dash for it.

Grabbing the sack with both hands, he frantically shook the soaking bag of compost and emptied the dirt on to the freezing wet ground beneath him, his feet subsequently being covered and blackened. But, honestly, that was the least of his worries. As soon as the bag was 99% empty, he slipped it over his head and battered a hole in the other end, allowing it to sit neatly upon his shivering shoulders and just about covering his manhood below. Upon quick inspection, Tom realised the bag wasn't as big as he'd thought but, right now, it'd have to do.

Then, dismissing the thought of whether the front door would actually be unlocked or not, he just made another run for it. Slamming the gate shut behind him, he pelted across the driveway (in front view of four surrounding houses) and dived into the porch. However, much as he wanted to recapture his breath, he hadn't the time as the porch was made out of glass, forcing him to clamber to his feet once more to try the front entrance; it was the moment of truth.

littlebigboy · 10-23-2010, 05:54 PM

wow this is great, please keep going:P

SAMaster · 10-24-2010, 12:28 PM

What an awesome story, well written, keep going looking forward to the next part...

Slenderman - Doctor · 10-25-2010, 06:18 AM

Part Three

The door swung inwards, opening to reveal Katie with her mobile staring right at him. After a quick flash and a 'save', Katie let Tom in, now bursting with laughter at his makeshift clothes.

"I'll give you credit for originality," she cried, grabbing the top of the bag and proceeding to split it right down the middle. "Look at you; filthy boy! First my knickers, now a compost bag! And don't think I'm gunna be cleaning up this mess," she demanded, making note of the dirt which now covered the hallway's carpet.

"In fact," she continued, "you can clean it up now."

And with force upon the cupboard's handle, she leant inside and wheeled out the vacuum cleaner. Taking one further photo with her phone, she handed him the nozzle and set him to work on his hands and knees. If she'd had a throne at this point, she would've been comfortably lounging in it with a crown and a bag of crisps. But, unfortunately, she had to make do with a biscuit and a banister on the stairs which she leaned on as she watched her brother do her dirty work.

Being the eldest sibling was great sometimes. Though, that didn't really hold up seeing as they were twins and it'd just happened to be Katie who was born first. Nonetheless, she did use it to her advantage and teased Tom whenever possible. Ladies first, indeed.

A good ten minutes passed until Katie allowed Tom to finish, deeming the carpet clean enough and the task completed to her satisfaction. As Tom closed the cupboard door and binned the compost bag, he turned his attention to his sister, his eyes almost welling up and his dignity completely absent. He said nothing.

"Learnt your lesson?"

"I'm so sorry," he replied, his head bowed in self-shame.

"That's not what I asked," she said.

"Yes, I've learnt my lesson."

And with a firm "good", Katie allowed Tom to re-dress and head back up to his room.

However, even after all was said and done, Katie knew Tom far too well. And she understood the male being. What Tom had done, in her eyes, turned him on. The taboo nature gave him a kick. So Katie decided, as she watched her brother slump back up to his bedroom, that she'd have to keep a very close eye on him this coming week. And her plan of action would be put into place immediately.

She followed in Tom's footsteps and headed back to her domain, deviously scheming and plotting in her mind. Tom wasn't out of the woods yet.

new2this · 10-25-2010, 11:50 AM

My 100th post, just for you.

Loving the story! Don't usually read them, they seem to be the same badly written nonsense every time. Nice to see someone with a decent grasp of the English language, and a fairly good imagination try it out.

Leopard · 10-25-2010, 02:47 PM

Enjoying this a lot! One question - why is it called Big Brother if they're twins and she's the eldest?

Memories for Life · 10-25-2010, 03:39 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Leopard

Enjoying this a lot! One question - why is it called Big Brother if they're twins and she's the eldest?

Since you evidently slept during human sexuality class, twins aren't born simultaneously! One fetus is birthed prior to its brethren. Until you've been in a delivery room and seen it in person, you'd think a twin (or more) pregnancy was a "battle of the fittest" upon exiting the birth canal. Most times the attending physician "directs" the order of birth (unless complications dictate a surgical procedure). In all likelihood, parents of multiple births are so exhausted from the process that exact knowledge of "who came first" is irrelevant as the head delivery room nurse prepares the birth certificates and can easily "rearrange" the order. To "claim" eldest among multiples pertains more to a dominant personality rather factual documentation!

Leopard · 10-25-2010, 04:00 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Memories for Life

Since you evidently slept during human sexuality class, twins aren't born simultaneously! One fetus is birthed prior to its brethren. Until you've been in a delivery room and seen it in person, you'd think a twin (or more) pregnancy was a "battle of the fittest" upon exiting the birth canal. Most times the attending physician "directs" the order of birth (unless complications dictate a surgical procedure). In all likelihood, parents of multiple births are so exhausted from the process that exact knowledge of "who came first" is irrelevant as the head delivery room nurse prepares the birth certificates and can easily "rearrange" the order. To "claim" eldest among multiples pertains more to a dominant personality rather factual documentation!

I didn't say anything about them being born simultaneously, and he is clearly not the dominant one.

undertaker · 10-25-2010, 04:33 PM

good so far!

Polarbear · 10-25-2010, 06:31 PM

Does this take place in 1984? Or am I just paranoid?

Slenderman - Doctor · 10-26-2010, 05:22 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Leopard

Enjoying this a lot! One question - why is it called Big Brother if they're twins and she's the eldest?

To clear this up... it'll become more apparent later, but the title refers to "1984" and the reality TV show. Basically, I'm on about the concept of 24hour surveillance, rather than a literal sense of being the big brother.

Quote:

Originally Posted by Polarbear

Does this take place in 1984? Or am I just paranoid?

2010.

Yes, you're paranoid

Leopard · 10-26-2010, 05:45 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Doctor

To clear this up... it'll become more apparent later, but the title refers to "1984" and the reality TV show. Basically, I'm on about the concept of 24hour surveillance, rather than a literal sense of being the big brother.

Ah, excellent! Can't wait to read more.

Slenderman - Doctor · 10-28-2010, 05:54 AM

Part Four

Tom logged into his laptop and immediately shut down the porn. The experience he'd just encountered had put him off for quite a while. As he flicked open Facebook, he told himself never to speak of the incident again, and he hoped Katie would keep shush too, using the photos on her phone purely for her own entertainment. (But then, he knew what girls and his sister, especially, were like. But, her being his sister, he had to trust her.)

As he spun round, he caught sight of the lacy black thong tossed to one side on his bed. Hesitating for a moment, he stood up, his head once more hung in shame, and took them to the bathroom and threw them into the laundry basket.

Through a crack in her door, Katie watched; her evil eye never straining from the view of her brother. She'd calculated a plan. But, first, she needed Tom out of the house. Actually, no. No, she didn't. She worked out what she could do in the meantime. Lounging back into her office chair, she tapped away at her laptop; Amazon.co.uk. She directed her mouse to the navigation and settled upon "Cameras and Technology"; sub-menu, "Webcams". Scrolling down, a small smirk appeared upon her face.

Too expensive. Too many wires. One star. Too old. Too big. Cheap quality. Poor reviews. Three stars. Four stars. Perfect!

The bottom of page one gave her precisely what she wanted. A deviously small webcam, wireless, attachable to almost any surface, easy to use with a built-in microphone.

Snatching her debit card from her purse in her bottom drawer, she entered her details and logged in. But then, suddenly, she stopped. Turning to the window with a thoughtful expression upon her face, she wondered to herself. ("Bedroom, my room, landing, bathroom, stairs.")

After a few moments, she dived back to her chair and returned to her keyboard.

Quantity: Five.

10-23-2010, 06:48 AM	#1
Slenderman - Doctor Truth or Dare Zealot Join Date: Jul 2009 Posts: 6,760	► Big Brother Part One He cowered in the corner, his legs squashed inwards towards his stomach as his arms gripped around them, forming a crouched ball sort-of shape; his back firmly up against the corner of the fence. He looked back towards the kitchen door where Katie was smirking back. Closing his eyes for a brief moment, he suddenly felt a cold heavy drop of water hit his neck and roll down his spine, with several more droplets soon following. Katie, his sister, locked the door and headed back indoors. "That'll teach him," she giggled, flicking the heating on as she skipped past the dial and walked through to the living room. Without any tiny feeling of guilt or worry, she smiled to herself and dived, head-first, into the warmth of the fluffy cream rug which lay in the centre of the room. Still half-laughing to herself, she made a reach for the remote and clicked the TV on. Meanwhile, a naked Tom was still cowering outside in the far corner of the garden; the safest option he had. See, not ten minutes prior to this, Katie had walked in on Tom masturbating into her knickers whilst watching some lesbians cover themselves with chocolate and, well, I'm sure you can visualise a porn scene for yourself. Unfortunately for Tom, he had forgotten to lock his bedroom door and, with his window being open even the smallest amount, a gust of wind broke into his room and blew Tom's door half-open at the precise moment that Katie had left the bathroom. Luckily for him, though, the garden was covered by several bushes and hedges surrounding the fenced borders. However, on the flip-side, unfortunately for him, he was locked out with no clothes and no way back into the house. Well, no. I tell a lie. I say there was no way back in; Katie had given him one option. In order to teach him a lesson and shame him forever, she'd unlocked the front door and told him that the only way into the warmth and privacy of the house was through the main porch by the front street. Obviously, though, Tom wasn't exactly going to let that be Plan A. There had to be a better and easier route back inside, though the challenge proved a very difficult one. As the rain started rattling off the shed windows, Tom knew his time and options were limited. If he didn't make a move soon, he'd be stuck outside for the foreseeable because, if he'd learnt anything about his sister lately, it was that she wasn't one to give in easily. And, worse than that, he'd be stuck outside in the nude, catching a lovely cold to go with the humiliation. Oh, and just to add another suitcase full of bad to the situation, his parents were away for the week, meaning Katie could have complete control for quite a long time. Now gently quivering in the corner of the garden, Tom had seriously learnt his lesson. That was fine. But he had to prove to Katie that he'd learnt his lesson. And that wasn't going to be easy. Last edited by Slenderman - Doctor; 10-23-2010 at 06:54 AM.

10-23-2010, 06:54 AM	#2
Cuffed getDare Sweetheart Join Date: Jan 2010 Location: USA Posts: 317	new story I see. Keep it up dude it's good. __________________ No thoughts, only ✨ Depp ✨

10-24-2010, 12:28 PM	#5
SAMaster Member Join Date: Dec 2008 Location: South Africa Posts: 94	What an awesome story, well written, keep going looking forward to the next part... __________________ Luvs: Edging, Milking Likes: Nudity, masturbation, semi public, light pain Limits: Family, scat, blood, needles, fire, illegal Everything else is prob a soft limit, which I like to see how far I am willing to go...

10-23-2010, 07:36 AM	#3
Slenderman - Doctor Truth or Dare Zealot Join Date: Jul 2009 Posts: 6,760	Part Two As an ignorant Katie continued watching Jeremy Kyle on ITV3, Tom started brainstorming for an idea. But, alas, he had nothing. To taunt him some, there was a pair of overalls hanging right by the shed window; however, he had no key and therefore no way in. Every idea he had was doomed to fail and he was starting to give up hope. Maybe he should just do what Katie said, and run round the front. But as much as he geared himself up to do it, a horrible question raced through his mind. What if she hadn't kept her word; what if the front door was locked? He wouldn't put it past her. However, at the exact moment he decided he'd make a run for it, he had a revelation. It wasn't the nicest idea, but it was the best he had. Keeping low and his hiding from view of over-looking neighbours, he crawled through the overshadowed areas of the garden, through the bushes and down towards the main decking by the back door. A final glance around to check neighbouring windows and then, with no hesitation, he made a dash for it. Grabbing the sack with both hands, he frantically shook the soaking bag of compost and emptied the dirt on to the freezing wet ground beneath him, his feet subsequently being covered and blackened. But, honestly, that was the least of his worries. As soon as the bag was 99% empty, he slipped it over his head and battered a hole in the other end, allowing it to sit neatly upon his shivering shoulders and just about covering his manhood below. Upon quick inspection, Tom realised the bag wasn't as big as he'd thought but, right now, it'd have to do. Then, dismissing the thought of whether the front door would actually be unlocked or not, he just made another run for it. Slamming the gate shut behind him, he pelted across the driveway (in front view of four surrounding houses) and dived into the porch. However, much as he wanted to recapture his breath, he hadn't the time as the porch was made out of glass, forcing him to clamber to his feet once more to try the front entrance; it was the moment of truth.

10-23-2010, 05:54 PM	#4
littlebigboy Junior Member Join Date: Feb 2010 Posts: 12	wow this is great, please keep going:P

10-25-2010, 06:18 AM	#6
Slenderman - Doctor Truth or Dare Zealot Join Date: Jul 2009 Posts: 6,760	Part Three The door swung inwards, opening to reveal Katie with her mobile staring right at him. After a quick flash and a 'save', Katie let Tom in, now bursting with laughter at his makeshift clothes. "I'll give you credit for originality," she cried, grabbing the top of the bag and proceeding to split it right down the middle. "Look at you; filthy boy! First my knickers, now a compost bag! And don't think I'm gunna be cleaning up this mess," she demanded, making note of the dirt which now covered the hallway's carpet. "In fact," she continued, "you can clean it up now." And with force upon the cupboard's handle, she leant inside and wheeled out the vacuum cleaner. Taking one further photo with her phone, she handed him the nozzle and set him to work on his hands and knees. If she'd had a throne at this point, she would've been comfortably lounging in it with a crown and a bag of crisps. But, unfortunately, she had to make do with a biscuit and a banister on the stairs which she leaned on as she watched her brother do her dirty work. Being the eldest sibling was great sometimes. Though, that didn't really hold up seeing as they were twins and it'd just happened to be Katie who was born first. Nonetheless, she did use it to her advantage and teased Tom whenever possible. Ladies first, indeed. A good ten minutes passed until Katie allowed Tom to finish, deeming the carpet clean enough and the task completed to her satisfaction. As Tom closed the cupboard door and binned the compost bag, he turned his attention to his sister, his eyes almost welling up and his dignity completely absent. He said nothing. "Learnt your lesson?" "I'm so sorry," he replied, his head bowed in self-shame. "That's not what I asked," she said. "Yes, I've learnt my lesson." And with a firm "good", Katie allowed Tom to re-dress and head back up to his room. However, even after all was said and done, Katie knew Tom far too well. And she understood the male being. What Tom had done, in her eyes, turned him on. The taboo nature gave him a kick. So Katie decided, as she watched her brother slump back up to his bedroom, that she'd have to keep a very close eye on him this coming week. And her plan of action would be put into place immediately. She followed in Tom's footsteps and headed back to her domain, deviously scheming and plotting in her mind. Tom wasn't out of the woods yet.

10-25-2010, 11:50 AM	#7
new2this Senior Member Join Date: Aug 2010 Posts: 105	My 100th post, just for you. Loving the story! Don't usually read them, they seem to be the same badly written nonsense every time. Nice to see someone with a decent grasp of the English language, and a fairly good imagination try it out.

10-25-2010, 02:47 PM	#8
Leopard Truth or Dare Enthusiast Join Date: Oct 2009 Posts: 2,522	Enjoying this a lot! One question - why is it called Big Brother if they're twins and she's the eldest?

10-25-2010, 04:33 PM	#11
undertaker Member Join Date: Oct 2010 Posts: 40	good so far!

10-25-2010, 06:31 PM	#12
Polarbear Member Join Date: Oct 2010 Posts: 33	Does this take place in 1984? Or am I just paranoid?

10-28-2010, 05:54 AM	#15
Slenderman - Doctor Truth or Dare Zealot Join Date: Jul 2009 Posts: 6,760	Part Four Tom logged into his laptop and immediately shut down the porn. The experience he'd just encountered had put him off for quite a while. As he flicked open Facebook, he told himself never to speak of the incident again, and he hoped Katie would keep shush too, using the photos on her phone purely for her own entertainment. (But then, he knew what girls and his sister, especially, were like. But, her being his sister, he had to trust her.) As he spun round, he caught sight of the lacy black thong tossed to one side on his bed. Hesitating for a moment, he stood up, his head once more hung in shame, and took them to the bathroom and threw them into the laundry basket. Through a crack in her door, Katie watched; her evil eye never straining from the view of her brother. She'd calculated a plan. But, first, she needed Tom out of the house. Actually, no. No, she didn't. She worked out what she could do in the meantime. Lounging back into her office chair, she tapped away at her laptop; Amazon.co.uk. She directed her mouse to the navigation and settled upon "Cameras and Technology"; sub-menu, "Webcams". Scrolling down, a small smirk appeared upon her face. Too expensive. Too many wires. One star. Too old. Too big. Cheap quality. Poor reviews. Three stars. Four stars. Perfect! The bottom of page one gave her precisely what she wanted. A deviously small webcam, wireless, attachable to almost any surface, easy to use with a built-in microphone. Snatching her debit card from her purse in her bottom drawer, she entered her details and logged in. But then, suddenly, she stopped. Turning to the window with a thoughtful expression upon her face, she wondered to herself. ("Bedroom, my room, landing, bathroom, stairs.") After a few moments, she dived back to her chair and returned to her keyboard. Quantity: Five.