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Originally Posted by Davros
Nice set up. Felt rushed, but you got the raw details there. This has some good potential  |
if you add more verbiage it will be a very good story.
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person one: "cake i said, Let them have Cake!!!!!"
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Last edited by the_boy; 07-29-2008 at 03:28 PM.
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