[Black Panther]

The idea is good, but it was executed horribly. Please double check your grammar and spelling before posting. I don't about others, but those types of mistakes are very distracting and interupt the flow of the story. You also rushed the plot. There was no build up to the dare, it was just thrown out of the blue. Lastly, spend more time describing your characters. When I try to imagine the three characters in my head, I have no idea what to see.