Wow. Simple as that. Do not know why you are here - you should surely be writing for a newspaper or something.
No, but seriously - this one feels like a story that you could take to a publisher, print it out and sell it in a store. Really great style of writing, an interesting setting and most of all: An convincing character - somehow the type of an anti-hero as it seems.
You saying 'I just felt like writing' makes me kinda (well not just kinda in all honesty) jealous, because never would I be able to write something like this.
Really good one - and I am looking forwards to the next chapter
And something to throw in: Keep him away from the drugs please... read enough sad stories ending with a guy dying to an overdose...
Kind regards
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