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Originally Posted by rocknroll
Whilst James and Kevin are delightful, I do think John is still my favourite. I think you should explore spanking some more – again, the regular kind and all its various positions and maybe anal/hand/penis spanking too. I like it best when it's just the sub and the dom, but maybe you could write a prequel? Something with the three boys punishing each other (spanking, probably, since according to John, they didn't use the homemade whip very much before his Sir came into the scene) , followed by some fucking would be nice.
Other kinks to explore.. I personally would like to see you incorporate butt plugs, figging, strappado, wax play, and piss play(?).. Maybe a scene where the boys get shaved of their pubic hair? I also liked chapter two, where John was gagged. More of that would be nice.
Just my input! Stay awesome and keep up the awesome job!
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Thank you for your input, all of it noted. It may a short while, over a week before I write more, as a real life meeting with boy A is just one day away now, wow, four long months since our last and first real life meeting. No longer just sight and sound, all the senses to use, my hand not his to punish and pleasure him and his hand not mine to pleasure my body, why stop at hands when we have our full bodies to explore be pleasured, used and abused.
Sir.