[Odiefrom]

I enjoyed reading a lot. The set up of a anthology is really good, and I like how you focus in on the meat of the story, without wasting time on too many of the extraneous details. One fault I've found, and the only major one, is that when you broke the time line to regain interest, I started losing a sense of continuity between the continuing storyline. Other than that, it is really good! And keep on posting, even if for just me! :P