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Old 07-28-2007, 05:12 AM   #6
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I'm going to mark this down as just FICTION if you don't mind merely for the sense of aesthetics.

This is actually pretty good, my one grammatical concern would be to space out your dialogue but otherwise I'm quite impressed. It's also good how you've given yourself this three-part limit though it's a shame you won't finish off your previous stories. I'll live, I suppose.
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