05-17-2011, 03:58 PM
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Join Date: Feb 2011
Location: Narnia
Posts: 108
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Great Start!
Hey my name is Tyler. So first of all this is a great first story!! I like your format and your idea but as Rachie said--try to make it more original. It might help to read a few other MxM stories so you can figure something new out. Also don't feel pressured to go at a fast pace-keep it nice and slow but your are truly doing great and as always, good luck. I cant wait for more!
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