I have to agree you are rushing and not spell checking or making sure it makes sense, in all places. I know it is your first story but it is better to get it right now.
Also the link in the first part is to a all in one suit but in the second part of the story she is being wedgied. Is there something missing or is it the wrong link? I have read it a couple of times before asking.
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[COLOR=Magenta]You could say no but whats the point in being on a dare site if you say no all the time......
If you don't put up a limits list, expect to be pushed on everything.
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