[Black Panther]

Not to sound rude, but I disagree with everyone here. Firstly, looks like zero proofreading was done. There are tons of spelling and grammar mistakes. Second of all, it's a generic plot. Third, the writing is bad. Every sentence seems clunky. Finally, you shouldn't be asking people for advise on the story. It should all be planned out before the first chapter is posted if you don't want it to die. Again, nothing against you personally, it's just my opinion.