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Originally Posted by Dangerous
Interesting story. But I do have some pointers such as grammar use and the story could use more describtive language. But otherwise, I enjoyed the store a lot and I was rather engaged by it. Looking forward to read the rest.
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Originally Posted by Rachie
Very good at present
Love the way you even put a disclaimer at the begining.
Did you type all of that today?
Look forward to reading more (about Kathy)
Love Rachie
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@Dangerous: Yea sorry Miss, I'm not a native English speaker.
@Rachie: No way!
I have published that story in two different sites, under the name 'Yours master' few months ago. But later I thought of adding this in to the getDare. And, if I had to type that all in one day, it's not a big deal for me, too. (I'm with the computer 24/7)
