Hey!
First of all excuse me, english is not my first language so i'm really sorry for my mistakes.
This story is fantastic you should definetly continue it as soon as you can. I just love every episode, you are a really talented, great writer. I hope you will write a lot more chapter, and you enjoy writing it as much as i enjoy reading it.
The body modifications are really creative and fun (for reading, maybe the participants doesnt enjoy them much
). In my opinion you can be a bit (or a lot) more sadistic, i would enjoy some really sadistic modifications.