It's a very good story so far. If you have spelling problems, I suggest writing the story in Word or another program with spell check, that should catch most of the obvious ones. It's also smarter that way something happens before you hit the "Post" button and the story is erased, you don't have to retype it. Also, you might want to try breaking the story into paragraphs to make it flow easier.
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"Words are, in my not so humble opinion, our most inexhaustible source of magic, capable of both inflicting injury and remedying it." ~ Albus Dumbledore (Harry Potter and the Deathly Hallows)
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