I think your story progressed far too quickly. Also, I recommend running each chapter through a spellchecker before you submit it on here; some readers get majorly distracted at the first spelling error.
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The most fun dare I've ever read: Click me!I do not give dares.
I do not take dares.
I am not looking for an Owner.
And, seriously, what part of my username suggests that I'm a Domme?!
Any questions? (My 'ask me anything' thread).
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Originally Posted by Philosophical
<spice girls> If ya wanna be my master, gotta get in my chat, being a wannabe is easy but I think you're quite a tw... </spice girls>
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