Begging?!?! There was begging? Oh...beginning...sorry, got all excited there for a moment. (Couldn't resist the temptation...I apologize...really, I do.)
It has some great potential, but it is a little difficult to read. You might want to try breaking up your paragraphs a bit more. Definitely keep writing!
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513 (+/- few hundred)/M/US
+ : humiliation, exhibitionism, toys and more, oh my!
- : extreme pain, scat, illegal
? : bondage, slavery, food
! :My judgement rules, unless you can convince me otherwise - now go be daring!
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