In order:
archive->achieve
'made a huge' -> 'made a lot' or 'made huge'
' have more' is technically okay, but you may want to consider 'lose more'.
'in sharp' -> 'in shape'
archiving->achieving
seams -> seems
'not to be' -> 'to not be' (although
'the direction this is going to' -> 'the direction this is going' or 'the direction this list is going in'. If I was in your position, I might put in a disclaimer about the list not necessarily being complete.
Your limit involving 'foreign' people might be better stated with a different word - I would suggest 'unknown' or 'people I don't feel comfortable with exposing this to', if I have guessed your intent correctly.
For future reference, spell check is not a cure-all. There are very similarly-spelled words with wildly different meanings, and spell check only checks if what you typed is in the dictionary.
That said, I wish you luck!
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