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Old 07-08-2016, 08:56 AM   #42
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Wow. I've read a few of your others, so I knew it was going to be a bit morally questionable, but that was so cringey to imagine... the poor girl. It makes me shudder to think your mind is what's going to be controlling the porn I watch for a week.

My favorite thing about your writing is the charismatic dialogue. Nothing they say seems unrealistic, which makes the characters feel real. This gameshow host is very cruel and takes joy in ruining the lives of people who participate in the show and that comes across really well. The body modifications are honestly pretty clever. (even if they are really fucked up)
My only negative thing is that the topic isn't my cup of tea haha. Obviously the spelling too, but that's not really your fault.

All in all, good job!
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