Hey everyone,
Would really like to know what people thought of the last chapter as it will most likely be a recurring theme in the next few chapters as well so would love any advice.
Did you like the transition story state into the sister's characters or not?
Was the story inside a story good or too confusing?
Was the sexual tension built in the play believable or far-fetched?
Did you like the flashback to the earlier scene, or would you find a linear version easier to follow or more enjoyable?
Any other advice or feedback you want to give?
Please do reply or pm me any feedback, as this is a slightly new style for me and want to know how it's being received before continuing.
All my Love
Sarah X
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