Ok I am simply not trying to be redundant by putting She says and I say after every sentence. Also it will make sense if you read because the speaking can easily be read by looking at the sentence and then thinking of the characters personality. Also if you are looking at the fact that I don't use characters names alot it is because I like to develop an impersonal relationship with my characters. If you will notice the other girl mentioned in the first installment has no name as of yet. Why the hell is it scaring you? There is nothing scarey. Please tell what you think is scarey. Also finish all the fucking installment before you critize my writing.
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This is a space in which I am supposed to write something funny and witty and everyone is supposed to read it and chuckle a little.
(I am just telling you what it is for)
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