Fantastic! I was slightly skeptical when you first decided to switch from truth or dare to strip poker, but it turned out wonderfully! I love how you added so much perspective to the characters and the game and never just skip straight to the sex. My one criticism is that, for me at least, when you use a technical term like "areola" it kind of reduces the eroticism. Other than that, though, I love it and cannot wait for the next part and to see what you do for the dares!
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