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Old 08-02-2010, 02:20 PM   #7
Jellybones
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I like it so far its a very original setting for the story! Though I feel its a little unrealistic because the teachers have yet to come looking for them. I guess it hasn't been long enough though for them to start to really worry. A little more description would be nice as well like what the clothes they removed were etc..
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