I like how you were able to spare the character's humiliation in this last setting yet still give us, your readers, the creativity and imagery that most of us enjoy!
I am really liking the story, this sort of rivalry based humiliation feeds into what I fantasize about most often. I think it's the true playful 'joy' that the top/dominant has when tormenting and humiliating the victim that works for me.
I look forward to more!
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