Thread: Fiction: Hidden Right In Front Of Me
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Old 03-22-2012, 06:23 PM   #6
Saphir
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oookay this prologue sounds kind of weird (as in content) but that actually might make it quite a fun story

I like it, I'm not really active tho, but I'll try to check it again when I come by next time, would be nice to read more.

The title seems well chosen, it makes me want to know more about the story Would be great if you carry on!

Best regards.

P.s. Take your time, slow it down, describe stuff detailed to get as much gratifaction as possible out of it for the reader.
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