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03-14-2017, 04:59 PM
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Scousejay
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Enjoying the story but not impressed by the last 3 chapters as no action but good build up, did anyone spot the mistake in the last chapter josh should of lost 2 items of clothing for the penalty as that what it cost in the earlier chapters?
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