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Originally Posted by polllover
This was great! Needs a little work on the dialogue marks but still a good story.
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may i ask what you liked? and what`s wrong with the dialogue?
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Originally Posted by Joker50
Actually I meant start, but hey. Not sure i like Kate but enjoying what she puts Anna through. I also liked the way you told her what the doctor would do and then revealed she had no doctor.
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what parts of what she did to anna you enjoyed? and what`s wrong with Kate?