Thread: Fiction: Adventure Abroad [MxM]
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Old 06-07-2012, 05:38 AM   #80
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That was a fantastic start to the story again!
I think that you have done a fantastic job picking up the story so easily again. I loved how you used your first language to make some suspense, and also I loved the writing style where you leave us uncertain about who it is. It makes soooooo good.
It really is great to see you writing again- you really are talented.
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