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Old 06-19-2012, 03:22 AM   #91
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Originally Posted by pokeherking View Post
updates. Thanks to DublinJohn for providing the update. I haven't dug into the chips, but they look right and fyi Pete's card was used near the beginning of the story by the OP.

Because I don't have to do the update and as a thank you to DublinJohn I am going to go ahead and post the next section early (I will try for Wednesday.)
Well spoted, I looked through and found it, might explain why my chip summary had some errors as we were going along, I'm not redoing the calc to find out.


I can do that after each update, if you want to PM me the chapter tonight I can have the update back to you for posting with the chapter on Wednesday (this is depending on timezones) I've a feeling that Mel is going to give Sam the chips and I've an idea that the dare might be standing facing the group with her hands on her head, I could be wrong.



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Also an update on my next story...

while playing beer pong this weekend I came up with a sequel for this story

Spoiler:
our friends will be playing beer pong (with dare rules)


I am getting ready to write the outline for this story and already have most of the story planned out. Right now it is going to be a match between Carly and Sam vs Freddie and Pete. (One of the challenges of this story was so many characters.) If someone would prefer other characters I will take that into consideration. Just let me know. Also I have most of the dares already planned, but if you have a two person dare that you would like to see one of these groups preform send me a pm. and I will try to work it in.

Thanks for the feedback!
Sometimes with more characters its better for the reader, a sequel is always harder as the nudity (or a lot of it) has been covered in game 1, so you need to make one character extremely lucky or introduce new ones as you go along.
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