I like the detail that you use.
And I'm also glad you didn't start out with anything sexual in the first chapter.
I can't wait until you post the next part.
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"How many seconds in eternity?"
And the shepherd's boy says, "this is a mountain of pure diamond. It takes an hour to climb it and an hour to go around it.
Every hundred years a little bird comes and sharpens its beak on the diamond mountain.
And when the entire mountain is chiseled away then the first second of eternity will have passed."
You must think that's a hell of a long time.
Personally, I think that's a hell of a bird.
14 years on GetDare!
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