First off, you could write a story that makes even some logical sense! You walk to your best friend's house and observe the girl following you "for a couple of miles"?
Then she just tells you your gf told her you were her slave for an entire month??? Gf must have forgotten to tell you!
Finally, she grabs you and drags you to her house which I'm guessing is next door to your best friend's house or did she drag you "a couple miles" back to where she was waiting for you, like next door to your house but you've never seen her before! She just tells you where these clothes and you just say "OK"???
Fiction doesn't mean illogical fantasy!
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