08-10-2010, 06:28 PM
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Join Date: Jul 2010
Location: Never Neverland. Second star to the right,& straight on til morning XD
Posts: 95
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Quote:
Originally Posted by equilibrium
I'm sorry, but I can't read this story, when it hasn't be formatted properly.
the proper way is:
"This is a example." said John Smith.
Jane Doe looked surprised "Oh!" She exclaimed, " Look, proper English!"
"Look," John smith says, " I can even write action as well."
And with that statement, John smith leant in and pressed his lips to Jane's.
If you want, I could be your beta reader/mentor?
A beta reader reads through work and fixes problems.
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Just letting you know,I'm actually writing it the right way. I'm writing it as a screen play.
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