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Originally Posted by ManicD
this has to be one of teh worst written stories i have read and considering i belong to another teenage forum for several years i have read some pretty shit stories
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http://www.getdare.com/bbs/showthread.php?t=5879 <-- read this
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It's also not the worst story i've read on here, just a little lacking on detail. I think some bits on how the characters reacted more would be good, what they thought was going on etc.
Also ManicD you complain about my story because it's too detailed, you complain about this i assume because it's not detailed enough.
So you clearly thing you can write so i here by challenge you to post your own story, if you're this critical of others it's going to be perfect isn't it.