Whilst James and Kevin are delightful, I do think John is still my favourite. I think you should explore spanking some more – again, the regular kind and all its various positions and maybe anal/hand/penis spanking too. I like it best when it's just the sub and the dom, but maybe you could write a prequel? Something with the three boys punishing each other (spanking, probably, since according to John, they didn't use the homemade whip very much before his Sir came into the scene) , followed by some fucking would be nice.
Other kinks to explore.. I personally would like to see you incorporate butt plugs, figging, strappado, wax play, and piss play(?).. Maybe a scene where the boys get shaved of their pubic hair? I also liked chapter two, where John was gagged. More of that would be nice.
Just my input! Stay awesome and keep up the awesome job!
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