Thread: Fiction: Mark's Babysitting Adventure
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Old 12-15-2009, 03:24 PM   #7
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Keep up the story. It's nice that there is at least a little bit of character development instead of just "he dared me to get naked" in part 1.

Keep writing, it will be interesting to see where this goes.
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