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Old 01-13-2021, 02:18 PM   #11
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Just wondering what people think of the chapter lengths. Ie are they to short or to long?

Chapter six

I was awoken by a flash, opening my eyes to see Mike, Sarah and chloe stood at the bottom of the bed.
Emma still asleep lying pressed against me, almost ontop of me with one leg wrapped over mine. To my embarrassment her hand still down my boxes.
As the phone in chloes hand gave off a second camera flash. Emma's eyes slowly open, giving my now flaccid cock and balls a squeeze "good morning"
"erm...mor Morning?" I stuttered back

Emma's hand began to shake and her face drained of colour hearing every one else's voices.
"oh good morning" Sarah said blushing at our embarrassing position.
"good morning you dirty little stop outs!" chloe squealed in excitement.
"sorry, my mums at work and I couldn't stop them coming up when I told them where you were" Mike added
"Sarah? You know you owe me a favour" Emma moaned
"yeah"
"can you throw a blanket over us and them kill us all?"
With Emma half pining me down I was unable and more the point unwilling to move.
The girls both laughed at Emma's joke as Sarah threw a blanket out covering us from head to toe and just in time as my dick was reacting the expected way to Emma's presence.

"are you guys and item?" Sarah asked
"are you guys fucking?" chloe shouts
Unable to think of anything to say l just enjoying the warmth of Emma's body.
But luckily Emma knew exactly what to say.
"no and no! Mike druged us and put us in this position, the fucking perv"
OK so maybe she didn't know what to say, but it got a laugh from every one.

"Come on let's go, we will meat them down stairs" Sarah announced
"but I wanna watch" chloe complained as I heard the door click shut.
I lifted my head out from under the blanket to check we where alone.
"there gone"
"good, truth or dare?"
"really?" I questioned. She just noded. "OK dare"

"I dare you to forget this happened"
My Hart sank as she pulled her hand out from my boxes, releasing my cock. She rolled out of bed and left the room, without a word or even looking back. My cock felt cold and my Hart empty without her.

After regaining my composure and redressing. I went down stairs, expecting an assault of questions and ridicule. But as I entered Sarah was sat at the kitchen table giggling with Emma, who was fully dressed and eating a bowl of cereal. Mike and chloe were in the living room watching television.

I headed to the kitchen to get some breakfast, Emma had her back to be but Sarah smiled at me when we made eye contact and with a bowl of cereal in hand I headed to the living room in an attempt to avoid the awkward conversation that would arise if I sat next to Emma.
As I sat on the sofa I could feel chloe's eyes burning a hole in me. Between mouth fulls, I asked with out even looking up at her. "what?"
"come on... Tell me"
I knew she wanted to know what happened last night. But there's no way I was going to say. I mean what would I even say, em's grabbed my dick and cryed her self to sleep. There no way I could do that to Emma, even tho I did feel a bit used and abandoned.
"sorry, what happens at a sleepover..."
"I know, I know" chloe finish before turning to Mike "you where there, what happened?"

"I don't know, I was asleep" Mike replied.
But chloe didn't look convinced "I know why you and Sarah broke up!"
The same look of terror filled Mike's face "what, no that's not fair. I really was asleep"
With out warning Emma's hand came from behind chloe snatching her phone from her hand "hay!"
"hang on I've just got some photos to delete and leave Mike alone or I'll kick your ass." Emma forcefully stated
Although Emma was a year younger than chloe and Sarah we all knew who would win in a fight.
A moment passed and Emma passed the phone back. I felt so relieved knowing the picture where gone.
I knew they wouldn't tell me, but I had to ask "why did you two break up?"
At that moment Sarah entered the room "because I've got hairy nipples, there we go now everyone knows"
Before any one could react the front door clicked open. "it's only me!" Mike's mum called through as Emma ripped a hat off Mike's head to put it on her own and just in time as Mike's mum turned the corner.

Seeing us all filling her living room "why wasn't I invited to this party?" she jokingly asked.
"Your far to beautiful to be at one of our party" Sarah replied.
"aww bless you, but young woman should lie. Mike my boss is a dick head to I have to go to a meeting, unfortunately it's in the middle of nowhere so I won't be back until tomorrow night. Of course Tom and Edmund can stay the night again if they want, but sorry ladies, out by seven"
She handed a bunch of money to Mike "there's some pizza money" as she headed upstairs.

"em's are you staying again?" Mike asked
"if you and Tom want me to" Emma replied
"of course I do" every then looked at me
"and Tom what do you want?" she asked
"I thought you knew what I want?"
Everyone's eyes shot back to emma
"That's a yes"

Sarah despite to change the mood in the room asked "who's Edmund?"
Chloe not knowing had here own question "what was that about hairy nipples?"

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