Sorry. I didn't expect it to cause this much controversy.
As I said earlier, it was done partly as a dare. However there was a serious message to it.
Rather than self-praising myself, I was really trying to point out the errors in so many other stories on this site. While I like to read other people's stories, I do also like to be able to understand them.
When you have a solid wall of text with no paragraph breaks or distinction between different people talking it can be very off-putting. That coupled together with spelling errors and grammatical mistakes can often make a very good story unreadable.
I understand that English is not the first language of many people on here so I'm not criticising particular people. However, just a bit of time reading through the post and inserting the paragraph breaks can often help.
That said, I hope that the story was enjoyed by most people and, when I get a chance, I will try to continue it in a more traditional style.
Thanks for the comments.
