[Joan Sky]

I like the intro sentence. Really gripping and smart.

I like how insightful the second paragraph is. Thank you.

I'm glad Asuka had people like Erin and Hayley beside her.

I'm happy with the sincerity and gratitude in which Asuka addresses all of them.

I enjoyed the wittiness of the award ceremony.

I think it's cool how Monica was supported unanimously by all those in her year. I know Asuka was doubtful at first, but was put at ease with the VP choice. Even though she wouldn't be there to see it, maybe Monica would prove her doubts wrong and excel, especially with the support of Danni as vice president.

I like how magnanimous Asuka was with Monica. Even though she didn't think Monica was one of the top candidates, Monica had everyone's support, and she was willing to give her best to support and guide her. That's a testament to her character.

I liked the formalities and how the interesting symbolic ritual of passing the torch was conveyed.

Nice ending as usual.

I enjoyed the prologue and look forward to the rest.

It amazes me how quickly you plot out a story, and write the chapters quicker still and expertly.

Perhaps I need to practice steadfastly.

Thank you.