Thread: Non-Fiction: 2 Straight Boys at a Sleepover.
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Old 01-30-2011, 07:21 AM   #6
Saphir
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I think a lot read without commenting everything :P
but if it motivates you to keep writing... I liked it
And I see no prob with a non-sexual build up
As long as you are going to write a longer story than only some less pages, it's, in my opinion, anyways better, to have a 'story' and not only sexual content

keep writing!
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