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BettyBoop · 03-13-2009, 04:15 PM

It's a short first chapter but it's my first story so consructive criticism, nothing much is happening yet, but I have aksed for ideas in the Authors Cafe.

03-13-2009, 04:15 PM	#2
BettyBoop Angel of Dare Join Date: Apr 2008 Location: England. Posts: 8,249 Blog Entries: 105	It's a short first chapter but it's my first story so consructive criticism, nothing much is happening yet, but I have aksed for ideas in the Authors Cafe.