[equilibrium]

Originally Posted by Bangin

"This is an example." said John Smith.
Jane Doe looked surprised. "Oh!" She exclaimed, " Look, proper English!"
"Look," John Smith said, " I can even write action as well."
And with that statement, John Smith leant in and pressed his lips to Jane's.


Everyone has a different style of writing and although this is less conventional and standard, it still works. I'm enjoying this story and am looking forward to more!

Actually, A is correct, for me at least .I was always taught that An is for vowel sounds, A is for consonant sounds
I, with my accent, say x-am-ple.

It talks about it more at the end of this page http://owl.english.purdue.edu/owl/resource/591/01/

Originally Posted by KittyCat91

Just letting you know,I'm actually writing it the right way. I'm writing it as a screen play.

Oh I'm sorry.
Please accept my apology.
I'm only used to reading plays, not screen plays, and they are a bit different,
starting with stage directions and scene setting.