GREAT START! This is an amazing start, I cannot see any grammar errors, YET, and I'm dieing to read more! Of course it has notthing to do with TorD, YET, I'm sure it will in the next installment and is still an amazing start!
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Here we go; Cool people use a ;; Duh! 
Likes: Candy.
Dislikes: You.
Limits: ' You have to cause I say so'
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