Just a suggestion as I quite like the concept of this story as it allows writers with any/different experience levels to try it. I think it would be a lot more interesting read however if writers alternated between writing as the slave and the master but continuing (not repeating) the story.
It would allow people from both backgrounds to be able to contribute to the story whether dominant or submissive. Just a suggestion but I think it would improve the story if each section was written from the opposite point of view.
I have my own story to continue however so I doubt I'll be contributing but just thought i'd put the idea out there as I believe this has good potential.
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