That would be okay. The more detail, the better, you know?
This is great, by the way. Hope to read more soon. I also like the different POV's of the characters.
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"How many seconds in eternity?"
And the shepherd's boy says, "this is a mountain of pure diamond. It takes an hour to climb it and an hour to go around it.
Every hundred years a little bird comes and sharpens its beak on the diamond mountain.
And when the entire mountain is chiseled away then the first second of eternity will have passed."
You must think that's a hell of a long time.
Personally, I think that's a hell of a bird.
14 years on GetDare!
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