06-18-2012, 07:56 PM
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Join Date: Dec 2010
Location: MN
Posts: 703
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Originally Posted by Slavegirlx
I love it!
I can't wait to read more! (:
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Thanks! More will be coming soon, hopefully!
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Originally Posted by slutjuice
nice start! looking forwards to the next chapter.
just a little thing: she seems pretty dramatic, like when the alarm goes off, instead being like 'oh shit' she says 'oh no!' a little less dramatic in places that don't matter, would make it a little more realistic. Good job!
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What do you mean by that?
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I need help figuring out my likes, dislikes and some limits! Dare me!
 Likes: Mouth soaping, writing lines, spanking, anal, slight pain, certain public things
 Dislikes: ???
 Limits: Certain public things, permanent, major pain, any type of sex, family, friends
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