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applebooty · 10-06-2008, 06:41 AM

There are far too many grammatical errors that make it very difficult to follow the flow of the story. I'm sure you could send it to someone who can weed out all of the errors for you. Otherwise, this really is not bad.

10-06-2008, 06:41 AM	#14
applebooty Account Banned Join Date: Sep 2008 Location: SexyTown, U.S.A Posts: 174 Blog Entries: 1	There are far too many grammatical errors that make it very difficult to follow the flow of the story. I'm sure you could send it to someone who can weed out all of the errors for you. Otherwise, this really is not bad.