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Rob · 03-22-2007, 04:17 PM

A very good story, but the grammar does detract from the reading of it. I love the idea, though it is pretty un-realistic (a girl getting a naked boy down from boy's locker-room shower, hot water in a school).

03-22-2007, 04:17 PM	#12
Rob Senior Member Join Date: Jun 2006 Location: Georgia Posts: 230	A very good story, but the grammar does detract from the reading of it. I love the idea, though it is pretty un-realistic (a girl getting a naked boy down from boy's locker-room shower, hot water in a school).