This is really good, very nice writing, I love your style!
Formatting and the whole grammar/wording/etc. stuff is good, just very little things:
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until the game finally came to and end.
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I'm not a native speaker so not quite sure about this one:
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Sam stay knelt on the floor, wiping the drool from his chin as James walked away from him,(...)
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The whole story is really interesting to me so far, not because of it's sexual part (for that I can go read or watch just about everything) but because of the relation between them (drugs, addiction, "abuse").
Would be great to read more
As to THC, I totally have to agree with your reasoning. Many people are not aware of the dangers of THC/ "addiction" / psychological background and only believe what they want to believe... not like I'm some "don't use drugs" -moralizer...
I wouldn't deny that I know many people who regularly smoke pot, and as to myself, let's just say I don't live far from Amsterdam...
But one should never think that it's like drinking tea and nothing can happen...
Anyway, great writing so far, keep it up!