I really quite liked the story - always like the 'darker' ones and this seems to fulfill that.
Like the others say though, more detail and descriptions would be good and would help slow it down and give you more time etc.
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18 Male
Limits: No extreme pain/permanent maiming or scarring. Live in family house so nothing too loud, but messy tends to be ok as can do it late. Nothing involving family (using my mother's lingerie is acceptable and liked - clean or dirty)/telling them but telling others (people on IM, friends etc) is fine.
Likes: Humiliation, degradation, sissification, cross dressing (can only really use lingerie as haven't got my own cross-dressing clothes), huge foot fetish
Have web-cam
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