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Old 10-22-2012, 04:56 PM   #1
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Hey guys! I recently started writing my first story, Slave Island, and I recently posted the 6th part. The interest level has been dropping lately and I don't know why. Is my story getting old? I would really appreciate any feedback about the story and any ideas on how to get the interest level back up. Thanks!

http://www.getdare.com/bbs/showthread.php?t=119825
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http://www.getdare.com/bbs/showthrea...432#post790432
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