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Old 07-11-2008, 07:13 AM   #34
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Thank you everyone, I'm glad you liked it. You are also right Lucifer, I was a little too heavy with the hints. I tried taking away the hints, but I couldn't quite find the balance for that. As for the flashbacks, I guess they aren't fully necessary, but I think they don't get in the way.
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