Thread: Fiction: Winter Break (MxM)
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Old 06-02-2012, 05:36 PM   #67
Saphir
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I think it's fine so far, even tho it was kinda fast...

The thing is you don't have to increase the sexual amount, you can still keep it on this level, have the night end at some point and continue at some other point later on, then with a "reset" of your amount of sexual content, being able to work on that then, without having to work over all before.

I still like it :P make the next chapter a little shorter tho maybe? xD just a little bit xD

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